minus-squarelightsblinken@lemmy.worldtoUplifting News@lemmy.world•Geographe Bay: Teen swims hours to save family stranded off Western AustralialinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·3 days agogood edit, also if you use numerals for numbers (12) dont change to word numbers (eight) inmediately after! also; i want to see the footage of the rescue copter clinging to the paddle board :( linkfedilink
minus-squarelightsblinken@lemmy.worldtoUplifting News@lemmy.world•Geographe Bay: Teen swims hours to save family stranded off Western AustralialinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·4 days agowhat should it say? linkfedilink
good edit, also if you use numerals for numbers (12) dont change to word numbers (eight) inmediately after! also; i want to see the footage of the rescue copter clinging to the paddle board :(